stage uno
2006-04-12
So...
I wondered if you're interested in being in my novels. Could you sign my guestbook with a description of yourself or someone else. I thought that all my character are too much like me, so maybe if you help me out with that you'll be the first people to proof read the finished thing.
I've finally started writing the sorty i hope to make something out of. The prologue's done. Its just describing the beginning's of the world it's set in.
Its a rather odd idea, i have created three Characters already. in fact, they are god's so, its hard to make them realistic :P
I'm trying to choose a beginning with my actually main character. Its hard to break them into the storyline, i've had this problem in the past. Once, it took me a month of drafting until i finally got a opening paragraph that suits.
This is the opening paragraph that i have done to use in the meantime:
It was a peculiar day, the sky was a murky blue, not bright and cheerful, but washed out and rather ill looking. The sun was giving off little heat, for it was late winter and the breeze was still bitter. The City of Barrist sat peacefully under the sun’s weak glow. It’s buildings all made from the traditional cream bricks and red tiles and the windows were brimming with bright colours because it was a ceremonial day. Luckily, the colours in the city made up for the drained sky.
Obviously, this entry makes the paragraph look small, maybe it is, but it certainly took me a while to construct it. Please please give me your advice. It saves me from asking random people.
Also, i was adviced to keep a journal of my writing so i have. Sorry if you find this tedious. But i need to do this so i can look back at my developing.
bye, Jessikah