chapter seven!
2006-05-08
hello readers!
My novel is running smoothy. I had to delete a load becasue it didnt flow to well. It sounded to much like an adult writing like a kid, rather than a kid writing like an adult.
So...i've just writen this coolio part where half the school get blown apart. It's rather good!
Then there's this fat fight between a bunch of bad guys...then a chase thingy.
So now im no the boring aftermarth which i must say, is hard to right about because ive got to explain in the most exciting way.
I'll put down a bit from the fight...so more of you fuckers can actually tell me waht you think!!
Aurora strode over to the leader Harith, who panicked and struck up a shield. Aurora frowned at this cowardly gesture. She pressed her palm against the shield and sent a wave of magical energy through it. The Shield glowed brighter and brighter, until it was so bright that the harith leader dropped it in surprise.
This foolish act was met by a fist that collided with her face. The harith staggered back into Daniel, who thrust an open palm into her back. Then, he fired a bolt of energy into her back.
There! it's not the best part, but the easiest bit to put in without having to explain myself. If you are interested in reading the whole thing so far, just ask and i'll send it too you. If you simply dont give a fuck, then never read this page again!
Another part i want to share with you is this nice bit that is fast paced. Its my attempted of being spontaneous.
The air in front of them was ripped open, revealing a blue door to the realm of portals. Daniel and Aurora flew into the portal, looking back. They were just in time as the magical bomb exploded as their cloaks whipped throguh the portal. The dug out chamber was blasted outwards. The ceiling of the corridor was torn off. Soil was chucked up into the sky as fire burst from the ground.
There, that bit is rather shite...if you want to express yourself..then please please do so in my guestbook!
Byeeee
Jess